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A Haiku Challenge?I thought you'd never ask me!Could I win something?
Something is quite wrong.It's Shannon's haiku above.The first word was wrong.Wrong? Yes, very wrong!It was meant to be "again"to follow the rules.
rules were elusive.I will be better next time.I am so sorry.
sorry i have notvisited your blog latelymission work exhausts
exhausts is stinky,and can make you sick.My advice...to avoidrush hour traffic, leave from work early...
Early error here:5-5-6-6-4 is odd.5-7-5 is better.
Better Haikus arecoming your way very soon.We're a bit rusty.
rusty was the clerkon the peoples court. heck yeah!oh the memories!
Memories of laughter,it takes me back, to Shannon and Orin in their goofy hats!
hats are things we couldnot wear in school where we learnedhow to write Haikus
Haikus are so funThanks for this Haiju ChallengeIt brought joy to me!
Me Tarzan, you Jane.Swinging on the jungle vines,like in the movies.
Movies make things up.Actors become characters.They yearn for Oscars.
Oscars I know of:The one from "The Odd Couple"And Oscar the Grouch.
"Grouch" is a hard wordto start a new sentance with. How about "St. Paul?"
Paul might seem harder.I had a friend named Paul once.I've lost track of him.
"'Him went to the store,'is very poor grammar," saidMs. Good to the class.
Class? Go to head ofor upper, middle, lowerTwo meanings...you choose
Choose to chew on shoes!Using words that sound alikeIs a lot of fun.
Fun is what I havewhen I go to the ball game.I'm going June 4th!
June 4th is SundayPerhaps I will have more timeto write my Haiku
Haiku Challenge II -"Fun For the Whole Family"could be it's slogan.
Slogan, "Haiku Is For You!"sounds much more enticing. Ah-ha! We should have a challenge...
Challenge? BRING IT ON!"Haikus are more fun than cheese!"Maybe it needs work.
Work is still needed.Five-Seven-Five is correctfor Haiku writing.Writing, otherwise,is not very hard at all:Count; be expressive!
'Expressive' is tough.It's hard to find things to say.Do we know catchic?
A Haiku Challenge?
ReplyDeleteI thought you'd never ask me!
Could I win something?
Something is quite wrong.
ReplyDeleteIt's Shannon's haiku above.
The first word was wrong.
Wrong? Yes, very wrong!
It was meant to be "again"
to follow the rules.
rules were elusive.
ReplyDeleteI will be better next time.
I am so sorry.
sorry i have not
ReplyDeletevisited your blog lately
mission work exhausts
exhausts is stinky,
ReplyDeleteand can make you sick.
My advice...to avoid
rush hour traffic, leave
from work early...
Early error here:
ReplyDelete5-5-6-6-4 is odd.
5-7-5 is better.
Better Haikus are
ReplyDeletecoming your way very soon.
We're a bit rusty.
rusty was the clerk
ReplyDeleteon the peoples court. heck yeah!
oh the memories!
Memories of laughter,
ReplyDeleteit takes me back, to
Shannon and Orin
in their goofy hats!
hats are things we could
ReplyDeletenot wear in school where we learned
how to write Haikus
Haikus are so fun
ReplyDeleteThanks for this Haiju Challenge
It brought joy to me!
Me Tarzan, you Jane.
ReplyDeleteSwinging on the jungle vines,
like in the movies.
Movies make things up.
ReplyDeleteActors become characters.
They yearn for Oscars.
Oscars I know of:
ReplyDeleteThe one from "The Odd Couple"
And Oscar the Grouch.
"Grouch" is a hard word
ReplyDeleteto start a new sentance with.
How about "St. Paul?"
Paul might seem harder.
ReplyDeleteI had a friend named Paul once.
I've lost track of him.
"'Him went to the store,'
ReplyDeleteis very poor grammar," said
Ms. Good to the class.
Class? Go to head of
ReplyDeleteor upper, middle, lower
Two meanings...you choose
Choose to chew on shoes!
ReplyDeleteUsing words that sound alike
Is a lot of fun.
Fun is what I have
ReplyDeletewhen I go to the ball game.
I'm going June 4th!
June 4th is Sunday
ReplyDeletePerhaps I will have more time
to write my Haiku
Haiku Challenge II -
ReplyDelete"Fun For the Whole Family"
could be it's slogan.
Slogan, "Haiku Is For You!"
ReplyDeletesounds much more enticing.
Ah-ha! We should have a challenge...
Challenge? BRING IT ON!
ReplyDelete"Haikus are more fun than cheese!"
Maybe it needs work.
Work is still needed.
ReplyDeleteFive-Seven-Five is correct
for Haiku writing.
Writing, otherwise,
is not very hard at all:
Count; be expressive!
'Expressive' is tough.
ReplyDeleteIt's hard to find things to say.
Do we know catchic?